Hi Kyle Thank you for sharing your writing about Kapa Haka. I think you have written more of an informational report rather then a persuasive piece of writing. Next time you could use statements such as It is good because... You should do... because... Well done for having a go. Miss Hudson
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Kyle
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your writing about Kapa Haka. I think you have written more of an informational report rather then a persuasive piece of writing. Next time you could use statements such as
It is good because...
You should do... because...
Well done for having a go.
Miss Hudson